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Submitted: January 5, 2012
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First stepby ~Catbit001

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Oki! Finally done!!!

This is my first piece done after joining DA. I've learnt alot from viewing work of some amazing artists and though i was a bit intimidated at first, i thought i'd take my first step, in ages, to improvement of my style. ^_^ YAY!

Once again, my most favoured media-Black ball pen on smooth drawing sheet. A5.

I really struggled to get in some detail. Flowers were my challenge here. I'm not good at them . Even the birds. I also tried a bit (a wee bit) with the material around her. Not too satisfied with the result. but eh..it's a start. ^_^!!

This took me some time to do, cause i only spent in between classes to do it in the college library (somehow the only place you can find peace in). So i cant really say how many hours were put in.

Please comment. Suggestions are much needed and appreciated!

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~Animefreak9601 Jan 5, 2012 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

this is awsome. her mouth doesnt look like its quite in the right spot tough

~Catbit001 Jan 6, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

kukuku. XP. I'm not really sure how to fix that though. ~_~?

~Animefreak9601 Jan 6, 2012 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

It looks like they need to come out of her face a bit more and sort of curve away from each other a bit.

~Catbit001 Jan 7, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

ah. i see now. it's also pulled in a bit too much at the lower lip too. -_-...

~Animefreak9601 Jan 7, 2012 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

yeh

~NPCbot Jan 5, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

The detailwork is impressive, but maybe there's too much of it in too little space? This might be a matter of personal preference, but the image looks somehow crowded to me. Busy, if you understand. Every part is so intricate, I don't know where to look at! I feel like there should be someroom to let the eyes rest and flow from one detail to another, as a kind of transition. (I can kinda understand it though if you were working on a A5 sheet. That's really small.) I see talent and skill in the drawing itself but the composition kinda lets it down.
My favourite part is that bird. I think it would be a beutiful piece all on its own.

~Catbit001 Jan 6, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

thank you! ^_^ And yeah i get what you mean. i originally planned at just ending her with the arm and her hair swirling around it. But i guess i sorta got carried away.. XP. The BG was also planned as i white plain BG. But.....yep...lines draw me in. I do think it would've looked better without them, cause it really did do away with alot of other things i had wanted to highlight.. But anyway. Thanks for the comments! ^_^

=sky-5hark Jan 5, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

OMG!.

Look at the detail!. The shimmer in the hair. And you say you lost it?

~Catbit001 Jan 5, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

i found a bit.. around this place.

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